To the Editor,
I write to you with the desire to convey my perspective on the argument tapped into, concerning the phenomenon of 'Text Speak' and the ostensible torment it has inflicted on teachers, in your latest issue. Whilst I do concede with some statements made within the article, in the entirety, I am afraid that I disagree with the outright condemning of social media platforms and the indirect labelling of technology oriented colloquialisms as a liability to the acquisition of Standard English.
As a student/youngster of today's generation, I find it quite unsettling how the article (falsely) reflects the youth's ineptitude to draw a line between contexts that justify the utilization of a certain nuance of English. Yes, the youth indulges in a new form of English alluded to as 'Text Speak,' however, the evidence provided to support the argument of this practice mitigating one's competency in Standard English is quite unreasonable. The article claims that children these days spend a lot of their time on "Facebook" and "Twitter" which translates to them having "limited vocabulary." As much as I have tried to comprehend this claim, I just cannot begin to absorb it merely because exposure to the World Wide Web and said platforms has perpetually been credited as for expanding our linguistic capabilities by constantly being introduced to novel words and phrases. So much so, new neologisms that have emerged from online phenomenons like 'Text Speak' are today even being legitimized by the Oxford English Dictionary. In my opinion, the English language has been subject to change throughout the of course of history. With every evolving generation comes an evolved form of the language, and for our generation technology just so happens to be the catalyst for this change.
Now, I understand how the manifestations of colloquial terminology and improper syntax and spellings may irk teachers. Nevertheless, what I do not understand is why technology is being accused as the primary reason for students' weakened awareness regarding the conventions of the English language? In fact, according to John McWhorter, a linguistics professor at Columbia University, the improper use of the rules of English is a relatively dated concept that can be traced back to several decades ago; thus, indicating that it is not purely the advent of technology that has caused this unfortunate notoriety to materialize. With all due respect, perhaps Mrs. Jordan should look into a viable solution to this problem as opposed to dismissing her students and their grammatical flaws as incorrigible. A balance needs to be struck between the exercising of the varied structures of English and I personally believe schools, where students spend a substantial amount of their time, should be a conduit to solidify this balance.
Sincerely,
Shriya Baweja
Hello Shriya, your article is a wonderful example of a letter to the editor. You manage to use a variety of immaculate vocab that expresses your emotions and point very clearly while presenting a smooth and easy to read structure. I agree with many of your points and your evidence that you have provided. I don't have any critiques as you have done a fantastic job but to maybe go a step further you could provide him with some ways to improve. In your last paragraph, you speak about a balanced formed between student and teacher so that text speak is not only to blame. Maybe, you could discuss how a balance in the article could be made so that it is not so one sided next time or so that this problem is prevented.
ReplyDeleteWow Shriya! I really enjoyed reading you're blog post. I definitely agree with you and you're comment on text speak as I believe that the english language evolves over time, I believe that you have stated everything as I have no concerns regarding your letter to the editor. I really like how you have explained how social media doesn't "limit vocabulary" to children although you have explained that having the World Wide Web as a source has aloud our generation to expand their language. Good Job !!
ReplyDeleteShriya, young one
ReplyDeleteI really like your letter to the editor. It follows proper structure and also it is very concise and focussed. Furthermore you used a lot of formal vocabulary and considering the fact that you mentioned that you are a youngster and you are writing a letter to someone that think that youngsters cannot write or speak properly already contradicts the entire article that the editor has written. Additionally I completely agree with you on your perspective on this article and I don't believe that technology should be blamed for our grammatical mistakes.
Well done!